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Re: Momentary
lol If you mean it didn't rhyme when you said it wasn't "Poetic," it wasn't supposed to lol. The rhyming in the beginning just happened. But it is still a ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Letters to the ones I love
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it :D
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Photo Manipulation
I am no expert at this, but it looks pretty cool to me. The second photo was interesting...the second wolf kind of looks like a ghost wolf...almost haunting. I like ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Letters to the ones I love
Dear Soul-thief, You try to be what you're not And you've never gotten caught It makes me sick to see How strung out you came to be Dear Kryptonite, The ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Love
This is really cute! But my heart wouldn't be able to beat anymore, if It didn't belong to you This is my favorite part. I usually hate poems like this ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: May I Go to Thee
Very Very Good! Oh God, let Scotland live let my land be free Oh Lord, may I see her shores and her high cliffs above the sea My favorite part! ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Heart Slap
This is an amazing poem that I really connected to & I know other's will be able to as well. In my life you were not a quick phase You ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Stuck Again
It’s like looking into a fogged mirror And I know she’s there She’s in there somewhere I can find her, I can try I can see straight up to the ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Concentrate.
I like this a lot. I couldn't help but think of the WWI & WWII when reading this poem. It is gripping and chilling. Scared, shivering, shouting, Sceptical; awaiting a ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Dumb it Down??
"Ayo dumb it down." You have heard this or atleast experienced this phrase in other words. This phrase that hints at the idea that I need to express myself to ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Bird of Flight
This is really really great! The skies call,The valley sings,The forest whispersSecret things This part was my favorite. I spend a lot of time outdoors, so this really spoke to ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Momentary
(Not sure if I was right to put this under Dramatic Poetry...just had to get this rant out of my head) Feedback always welcome. It's a myth that cat's have ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: 313
I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this. Honestly, it's quite amazing. I was hooked on the first line: Brazilian rosewood, back and sides, Hard-Maple top unfinished. Clock ticked ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The Super Boy
I really like this poem. Poems like this usually irk me, because they are overly sappy that I can't help to just role my eyes...(and no..I'm not a jaded girl ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: The night I died (did I really die?)
This was amazing!! It had the perfect amount of suspence, which I loved. I felt like being trapped inside an unknown realm from which there was no escape. My fate ...
Aug 30, 2011
